7/1-IELTS Writing Task 2-Kathy

Many people argue that influencers on social media result positive or negative effect.(Many people argue that influencers on social media may have positive effect on society while others possess the opposite standpoint.) In my opinion, I believe influencers have some negative question such as sharing false information.

Influencers could bring some positive impact. One of main reasons is that people can receive various information from influencers like YouTuber.(When it comes to information and educations, influencers could provide various information and therefore bring some positive impact.) It is a convenient method that people can learn some common knowledge or information online. For instance, fitness influencers share their menu(workout routine) to audience who want to keep in good shape. Beauty influencers record videos about introducing some products to solve certain skin problems like acne or pimple. (Outcome) In addition, many influencers interact(offer) some perspective including expertise and daily life with their audience or fans. They could inspire some (unconfident) people who are unconfident after watching influencers’ posts or videos.

On the other hand, influencers could have some negative impact. One serious problem is that some influencers make statements that depend(based) on their own experience or perspective. Lacking data or research supports, influencers could mislead some false information to people. For example, a Taiwanese influencer shares a menu about that (if) people do not eat rice for two weeks, it(they) would lose over five kilograms during the period. However, many doctors show scientific researches to correct the influencer’s statement. Thus, it can be proved that influencers may provide information which have not support and they have responsible to check (whether) the statement which is correct.

In conclusion, although some people believe that influencers provide some information which people can receive different perspective, I still consider influencers need to check the information accuracy. Nowadays, people receive wide range information, influencers should take responsibility to make sure every source is true.