7/1-IELTS Discussion- educational disparity-Alex

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate regarding educational disparity. Some individuals believe educational disparity between rich and poor students will always exist, while others argue that it can be solved by government policies. In my opinion, I firmly believe that gap of education between rich and poor students will always exist, and this situation(reasons) would be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

For affluent families, they can offer more resource to their children. Some rich family will allow their children to take part in cram school or private tutor program after school. For instance, my high school best friend’s parents hire a private tutor to teach their sons numerous basic subjects, such as math, science and so on.(Outcome) Furthermore, wealth families invest their children to attend extracurricular talent(activities). Rich parents enroll individuals in a variety of classes, including tennis, piano and ballet. For example, my cousins attend private tennis course twice a week , which costs 3000 NT dollars per hour. Therefore, wealth families can offer more opportunities to allow(for) their children to attend extra activities.

On the other hand, there are numerous policies solving the issue. Taiwanese government establish online learning platform called E-Learning to offer poor students. This website not only offer academic subjects like physical,(physic and) Chinese but also offer talent course like painting, photograph. My classmate frequently visited E-Learning to learn painting. After one semester, he got a gold medal from Taipei painting competition. Thus, government polices can offer various opportunities to learn new skills and basic subjects.

To sum up, I definitely believe educational disparity between rich and poor students will always exist, which may become larger. Therefore, government should take more attention about poor students.