2. pronunciation–> “commute”, “power bank”(i thought you say power bag)
3. I don’t think your example of “browsing smartphone in commute” is convincing for the dopamine-driven system standpoints. You should elaborate more on “how relax you are when you browse social media..”
1. “for” my daily life–> “on” my daily life
2. pronunciation–> “commute”, “power bank”(i thought you say power bag)
3. I don’t think your example of “browsing smartphone in commute” is convincing for the dopamine-driven system standpoints. You should elaborate more on “how relax you are when you browse social media..”