The biggest problem of your pronunciation is that you try “too hard” on every sounds. Native speakers often use “lazy sounds” so that they can talk faster and it sounds more fluently. For instance, stay inform”ed” should be pronounced without the “ed”
1. Please directly add on your personal experience after your topic/introduction sentence because you can talk more(here, you do the comparison between past and present): People use their smartphone to follow the latest news + “For instance, as a PM in American bank, I need to be specifically aware of US News. Social media allows me to keep updated with the latest events and therefore facilitates my working”
The biggest problem of your pronunciation is that you try “too hard” on every sounds. Native speakers often use “lazy sounds” so that they can talk faster and it sounds more fluently. For instance, stay inform”ed” should be pronounced without the “ed”
1. Please directly add on your personal experience after your topic/introduction sentence because you can talk more(here, you do the comparison between past and present): People use their smartphone to follow the latest news + “For instance, as a PM in American bank, I need to be specifically aware of US News. Social media allows me to keep updated with the latest events and therefore facilitates my working”
2. pronunciation–> “spread”, “determine”, “typhoon”
3. I was very “comfort” at first–> I felt “happy” at first.
4. What’s the “outcome” of your story???–> try this question on class