06/06-IELTS Writing Agree/Disagree- social media

Most people trust that social media influencers have a advantage effect on social environment .Others have a disadvantage Influence. (while others believe that they have detrimental influence)Today, social media increases many of various sectors , even workers try to develop second skills becoming influencers. (In my view, I agree with the idea that influencer has a significant negative impact. This essay will discuss my reasons for this stance and provide examples to support my opinion, leading to a reasoned conclusion.)

In the past, a part of creators did not do the creators for full time, they researched amazing videos and tried to copy models , although their global visibility could not be easily established. They were strictly limited by traditional media gatekeepers. This not only limited their imagination but also could not have cultural exchange. Despite having good skills, without social media promotion, their videos often unnoticed. For example, they had lots of ideas, namely cooking, educational content, and sharing crazy opinions on platforms. Nowadays, lots of creators use social media to promote knowledge for audiences. It is clear that platforms such as YouTube and TikTok increase opportunities to connect society.

However, not everyone use social media correctly , we can see a number of negative news on  platforms, where various of scams lead to victims lose their lives. Since social  media appeared, it should have made this world better rather than dropped down . I agree that everyone should use social media to create their next step forward. Not only you can  cultivate interest but also improve yourself. 

Overall, Undeniably Social media has high risks for using each sectors, namely, scams, privacy and fake information. However if platforms encourage influencers spreading correct knowledge, I believe that people use responsibly, it can towards a better future.

在〈06/06-IELTS Writing Agree/Disagree- social media〉中有 2 則留言

  1. 大方向:
    1. 這題是agree/disagree題型,所以你應該選擇一個立場,並下去寫,但你寫成Discussion題型,討論了社群媒體的好處跟壞處

    2.整體缺乏架構,接下來練習請用我們提供的模板

    3.第二段整個偏題了,你應該要在這裡討論網紅對社會帶來什麼影響,而不是闡述網紅目前面對的環境等

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