12/16 Writing Task 2 Louis

The question of whether family is more crucial than friends has a positive or negative effect is often debated. This issue has gained attention recently, dividing opinions. In my view, I agree with the idea that parent is more critical than friends has a significant positive impact. This essay will discuss my reasons for stance and provide examples to support my opinion, leading to a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly, one of the main reasons why I believe agree is because of  family provide the long-term emotion and financial support. For instance, when I face some serious problem such as academic stress or financial difficulties, my family members usually the first to offer me help. (Personal experience) This clearly demonstrates that family in relationships are more stable than friendships.

Furthermore, it dawned on me that family is beneficial when I consider its influence on my personal development. Take my own experience on the growth, my mother always request me to learn the important of respect and responsibility.(More concrete: like how she teaches you, show respect to who?) So in today’s adult-life, I find my mother’s teaching is visual. In addition, these visual make me get more benefit in my recently life.

In conclusion, Although there are many differing opinions on the question of family and friends, I strongly believe that the family plays the more crucial role in my life based on the reasons discussed above. The evidence and examples provided confirm that family offers lifelong support and teaching while friends cannot replace forever.

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