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Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online
Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
How has social media changed the way people communicate?
What do you think social media will look like in the future
Why do some people feel addicted to social media
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You sounds a bit robotic, try to be more emotional lol
1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
nice introduction, but the time is a bit not enough, so try to dig into your life
0.57: you feel awkward –> cite a personal experience. For example, “last time when I was talking with my high school friend, I found the atmosphere is a bit awkward. We no longer share the same interest..”
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
0.37: earthquake news.. –> it’s really important to choose the thing you can speak more before answering. First, standpoints in the topic sentence is about “global” news, so “earthquake” isn’t appropriate. Second, you don’t have many thing to say about “earthquake”. Why don’t say “Donald Trump”, “war” ?
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
0:39: check up on each other often –> same issue here, dig into your personal experience
1.17: message frustrated you –> same issue here, dig into your personal experience: What happened? what did your friend send?
5.What do you think social media will look like in the future?
0.44: help you learn more efficiently –> what did you learn?
3.Why do some people feel addicted to social media?
nice content for the first standpoint!