6/30-IELTS writing task 1- Emily

The line chart illustrates the proportion of participants for film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances in Melbourne in 2000 to 2020.

 

Overall, film club is the most famous activity in whole period and amateur dramatics had dramatic increase in 2010.

 

Film club have the highest number of participants in 2000 to 2020, over 60, as twice as more to the following activity in 2000 who named martial arts. The number of participants for martial arts remained in same between 30 and 40.

 

 

Amateur dramatics had just below 30 number of participants in 2000 and increase slowly in 2010. However, the number had dramatic decrease to under 10 in 2010 to 2020. On the contrary, table tennis had fewer participants in the beginning, and had slight increase to over 50 in 2010. Music performance was started in 2005 and increase gradually in the last 15 years, from 0 to just below 20.

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  1. The line graph illustrates the number of participants engaging in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, between 2000 and 2020.

    Overall, the film club consistently remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while participation in amateur dramatics steadily declined. Notably, table tennis experienced significant growth.In 2000, the film club attracted the highest number of participants at approximately 65, and this figure remained relatively stable, slightly rising to around 67 by 2020. In contrast, amateur dramatics started at 35 participants but saw a continuous drop, reaching zero by the end of the period.

    Table tennis saw a remarkable increase from 15 participants in 2000 to roughly 52 in 2020, surpassing martial arts in 2015. Martial arts fluctuated between 30 and 40 participants, peaking around 38 in 2010 before a slight decline to approximately 33 in 2020. Meanwhile, musical performances showed moderate growth from zero in 2000 to around 17 participants by 2020, overtaking amateur dramatics after 2010.

    In summary, while the film club remained dominant, table tennis gained substantial popularity, and amateur dramatics lost participants completely.

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