6/24-IELTS Writing Task 2-Discussion work life balance-Alex

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate regarding whether peer pressure has  positive impact on young individuals. Some people believe that peer pressure cause beneficial impacts, while others argue that it has more negative consequence. In my opinion, I definitely believe peer pressure let me grow obviously.

On one hand, one advantage of peer pressure is that it can increase student’s motivation(motivate students) to study and perform well. For example, high school students may try to study harder when theirs friends take(reach good) achievement in academic. Besides, they also have more motivation to pursue high GPA.

On the other hand, teenager may build a variety of bad habits (from their friends.) Some young people may start smoking and drinking because theirs peer do it(so) and encourage them keep going. For instance, my high school classmate learned to smoke and drink alcohol without(under) 18. These behaviors not only illegal but also harm their bodies. However, peer pressure cause more positive ways.

From my perspective, I definitely believe peer pressure let young people grow obviously. Another significant is that it is easy to enhance communication skills and social abilities among adolescents. When people regularly interact with other people, they learn how to express theirs opinions and listen to others. Furthermore, many school encourage teenagers to take responsibility. For instance, when I was high school students, I need to discussed with my classmate to finish scientific project. This process not only let me learn how to express my opinions but also take responsibility.

To sum up, I strongly believe peer pressure leads to numerous benefits, such as increasing student’s learning motivation and enhancing social skills. Therefore, peer pressure is significant for individuals, especially young people