6/24-IELTS writing task 2- Emily

Some argue that family is the priority in our life because they are willing to give anything without selfishness, while others believe that friends are more important than family due to the share interests. I believe that friends are more crucial than family because of the same values and in life after childhood, (and i would elaborate my viewpoints in the following paragraph.)

Firstly, friendships build on the same value and interests. Hence, we find it is easier to be understood and strengthens the sense of belonging.(Firstly, the feeling of belonging is often provided by friends since friendship are build on the shared value and interests.) As a result, we tend to rely on friends when we face problems. For example, every friend around me prefer to share their emotions with friends instead of family. The generation gap causes misunderstanding and less mental support. That is, friend plays an important role in people’s lives, helping us relax and unwind.

Secondly, the time we spend with family becomes less than friend in adulthood. School, works and relationships are full of our life gradually. Therefore, when we move away from families, friends become the core of our life. For instance, more than 80% of people move to big cities for better schools and job opportunities. The long distance between them and their families becomes an invisible barrier. Hence, friends are the one who give us supports and companionship, becoming the priority of our life.

In conclusion, although family provides selfless support, friends offer the sense of belonging and emotional support when we move away from home after adolescence.