第一題(7-2)-
1. the second part is a bit superficial. You can have the standpoint, saying that online shopping cannot replace in-store shopping because of the experience..
第二題(7-4)-
1. excellent content
2. fix the problem–> “address” the problem
3. to avoid I cannot make the same mistake–> avoid “making” the same mistake
第三題(7-1)-
1. again in the class
第四題(7-5)-
1. It was I paid for it–> it was paid by me
2. I think the second part is a bit too short and you must have some experience to elaborate. It has a really good opening, but like i said, “WHERE’S THE TWIST?” You can mention the experience that someone else use your credit card online, and you have to lock the card..
第五題-
1. The overall content sounds “lagging”
2.pronunciation- “hinder”
第一題(7-2)-
1. the second part is a bit superficial. You can have the standpoint, saying that online shopping cannot replace in-store shopping because of the experience..
第二題(7-4)-
1. excellent content
2. fix the problem–> “address” the problem
3. to avoid I cannot make the same mistake–> avoid “making” the same mistake
第三題(7-1)-
1. again in the class
第四題(7-5)-
1. It was I paid for it–> it was paid by me
2. I think the second part is a bit too short and you must have some experience to elaborate. It has a really good opening, but like i said, “WHERE’S THE TWIST?” You can mention the experience that someone else use your credit card online, and you have to lock the card..
第五題-
1. The overall content sounds “lagging”
2.pronunciation- “hinder”