In modern society, the subject of peer pressure has sparked widespread debate. While some believe that peer pressure brings beneficial influence on young individuals, others argue that it has more adverse effects. In my opinion, although peer pressure may offer certain short-term benefits, its harmful consequences far outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, young people can make progress by(because of) peer pressure. In school, there are several exams that everyone should take and compete with others to secure the highest score. When seeing peers are studying and focusing on one thing, children will modify them and want to (be motivated to) improve themselves. (Concrete example) Moreover, peer pressure can foster a spirit of healthy competition, which plays a crucial role in preparing young people for future challenges. For instance, a recent study conducted by Cambridge University has shown that 40% youngsters in China develop discipline and set goals from pressure of competing with others. Therefore, it is beneficial that young people encourage by peer pressure to put in more effort and push their own limits.
On the other hand, many argue that peer pressure often causes more harm than good, especially for young people. Young people may engage in risky and unhealthy behavior (such as smoking, drinking, or even cheating in exams.) just to gain acceptance from their peers, such as smoking, drinking, or even cheating in exams. For example, a study by the World Health Organization found that teenagers who felt strong peer pressure were twice as likely to take up smoking habits before the age eighteen.(Concrete example) Instead of developing their own identity, young people may easily follow the crowd. In addition, constant comparison with others can lead to stress, low self-esteem, and even depression. As a result, I believe that peer pressure often leads to serious personal and emotional drawbacks that outweigh any short-term motivation it may provide.
In conclusion, although peer pressure can make young people make progress and achieve their short term goals, when it comes to long-term development, it leads to hamper personal emotional health and even lead to anxiety and depression. From my perspective, we should take the responsibility for our long goals and focus on ourselves rather than motivated by peer pressure just in that moment.