7/6-IELTS Writing Task4-Aurora

Some people believe that educational disparity between rich and poor student will always exist, while others think it can be reduced through government policies and social initiatives. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

On one hand, some people believe that educational disparity between rich and poor students will always exist because this is a long-term consequence, which isn’t(cannot be) easily changed. Many rich parents help their children to achieve the accomplishment quickly through their money, power and personal network. For instance, my university classmate’s English ability is very good(exceptional) because her parents hired a private English teacher for her since she was a child. What’s more, she can be an exchange student abroad but doesn’t worry about the tuition and daily expense, which her parents will give her. However, I need to do a part time job to finish these things by myself.

On the other hand, others think educational disparity can be reduced through government policies and social initiatives. For instance, the government can offer a housing subsidy to low-income families and provide the scholarship to poor students. However, poor students still face a lot of problems. For example, although some students are not from low-income families, they still need the scholarship to complete the university studies. However, they aren’t eligible to apply for the scholarship, which cause many students can’t be benefit from the policy.

In conclusion, I think educational disparity between rich and poor students will has a wider gap because government policies can not ensure equal benefits for all students. And rich students get better education because of their parents’ resources.