7/16-IELTS Writing Task Agree/Disagree-social media-Kay

In recent years, social media influencers have become increasingly common and influential in many societies. While some people believe they have a positive impact, others argue that their influence is mostly negative. In my view, both sides have valid points, and their effect depends on how they use their platforms.

There is no doubt that influencers can bring a tons of benefits to societies because they encourage(stimulate) the growth of economy. For example, both international or local brands are willing to hire influencers as their brand ambassador in order to promote their products. This is because many influencers are well-behave, attractive, and likable personalities.(Outcome: create giant profit) In addition, they often have built a large base of followers over the years. These qualities are highly valuable to companies, they not only can attract more consumers quickly but also reduce marketing costs compared to hiring international celebrities.

However, there are some people who think that influencers could bring negative effects to societies because some influencers tent to attract more sponsorships and followers due to disseminate (of the)exaggerated contents. This action would (be) misunderstood by some youngster, who cannot distinguish right and wrong. For instance, some influencers try to earn more revenue from selling unreliable products with low price, so they fake a considerable amount of informations about the products, which could even violate advertising regulations.(which is detrimental to the physical and mental health of adolescents.) (Example)

In conclusion, while social media influencers may sometimes have negative influence, I believe that their impact is mostly positive, when their messages are thoughtful and authentic.With the right guidelines and audience awareness, they can play a constructive role in shaping modern society.