2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
0.46: earthquake news.. –> it’s really important to choose the thing you can speak more before answering. First, standpoints in the topic sentence is about “global” news, so “earthquake” isn’t appropriate. Second, you don’t have many thing to say about “earthquake”. Why don’t say “Donald Trump”, “war” ?
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
0.46: earthquake news.. –> it’s really important to choose the thing you can speak more before answering. First, standpoints in the topic sentence is about “global” news, so “earthquake” isn’t appropriate. Second, you don’t have many thing to say about “earthquake”. Why don’t say “Donald Trump”, “war” ?