1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
0.32 get the glimpse in their life–> so good!
01.10 superficial conversation –> it sounds like you have little opinion on this topic, so let’s delve into your personal experience. For example, in the past, my friends and i could have deeper conversation for the whole night. However, right now, we just text each other, and never squeeze up the time to hang out with each other.
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
0.33 too many examples –> two examples could be enough
1.26 i think you can elaborate more on the consequence of receiving misinformation.
3.Why do some people feel addicted to social media?
perfect content!!
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
0.36 even when they “physically far apart”–> i cannot understand ha
5.What do you think social media will look like in the future?
pronunciation: data
1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
0.32 get the glimpse in their life–> so good!
01.10 superficial conversation –> it sounds like you have little opinion on this topic, so let’s delve into your personal experience. For example, in the past, my friends and i could have deeper conversation for the whole night. However, right now, we just text each other, and never squeeze up the time to hang out with each other.
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
0.33 too many examples –> two examples could be enough
1.26 i think you can elaborate more on the consequence of receiving misinformation.
3.Why do some people feel addicted to social media?
perfect content!!
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
0.36 even when they “physically far apart”–> i cannot understand ha
5.What do you think social media will look like in the future?
pronunciation: data