6/14-IELTS Writing Task 2- ruby

Undoubtedly, with the importance of technology higly(highly) emphasized, people tend to bring technology into their daily lives. Whereas some people look upon technology as a horrible thing, and will lead to negative outcomes, I am holding an opposite toward this statement, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

Nowadys(Nowadays) technology develop in a variety ways and improve rapidly, that benefit(benefiting) people to save more time and energy. In other words, it helps us to boost efficiency and make life more convenient and comfortable. Take me as an example, I often shop online, which allows me to browse and purchase products without going to the offline(physical) stores. Thanks to the technology, this not only save times but also provides a wide range of options, making the shopping experience more efficient and convenient.

Furthermore, technology also brings new forms of entertainment, such as mobile games, which are popular around the world,(.) people can temporarily escape from their busy and stressful lives. According to a study conducted by Japan university, there are 75% of people in the world have a habit of playing mobile games, and 70% of them believe that mobile games play a significant role in their lives, and can’t live without it.(Personal experience/concrete example)

In conclusion, based on the aforementioned, technology has many positive impacts on society, due to it brings efficiency and enjoyment in our daily.