6/13-IELTS writing task 2- Emily

Some argue that technology provides a wide range of information which helps people to broaden their horizons, while others believe that people may (have) over-reliance on technology and will lose personal thinking skills in the future. In my opinion, technology offers more advantages and has positive impact on individuals and societies in a long-term consequence.

Firstly, technology provides wide scale of knowledge and become a useful tool for people to learn without spending money. These tools offer an alternative choice for people who cannot afford tuition fees, not only broadening people’s horizons but also offering(providing) equal access to education. For example, during the pandemic, people started to use technology to learn everything they have interests in.(the example is too short: what did you learn exactly? What’s the outcome?) Furthermore, technology replaced the traditional education gradually and more and more cram schools were closed in Taiwan due to financial problem.  

Secondly, the information and artificial intelligent(intelligence) provided by technology improve efficiency and effectiveness when we face massive works. The wide range of knowledge, intelligent tools and organization skills help us to reduce(save) a lot of time on searching and organizing data. For instance, ChatGPT is a famous technology tool for people to use. Many engineers use AI tools as an assistant of their job and organize their daily life. The capabilities from technology help us to concentrate on important tasks and reduce time on searching for complex information.

In conclusion, although the over-reliance and privacy problem may cause serious issues, the knowledge and convenience provided by technology have more advantages than drawbacks in a long-term consequence.