5/19-IELTS Writing Task 2-Ingrid

It is a wide acknowledged that technology has changed modern society, affecting work, study, and communication. Some individuals believe technology could cause negative issues, but I strongly agree that it has more benefit impact to improve the development in different field.

One significant advantage of technology is that it is more effective way to communication(communicate). In the past, people need to spend days or even weeks to contact with someone overseas, whereas nowadays, they can have a phone call immediately through social medias or internet. For instance, many international students are able to connect(reach out) to their parents who live far away. In addition, the improvement of technology, such as e-mail, boost the social communication between individuals and companies, which make efficiency(the process) easier and faster. Therefore, technological developments certainly improve the connection between people, making daily life more efficient.

Technology also plays a vital role in education and career development. It allows people to gain knowledge in various fields by(through) online courses, educational video, and professional resources. In this way, students in rural areas can receiving(receive) more learning opportunities to improve their score without a specific teacher or staying at classroom. Moreover, technology create new industries and job opportunities, like software engineering and digital marking(marketing). For example, in Taiwan, the rapid growth of technological companies provide many graduates with stable work and high salaries, particularly in semiconductor industry. As a result, technology not only increase the academic performance to children, but also offer a better quality(career path) to young generation.

In conclusion, despite some disadvantages, technology has greatly enhanced people’s life in behavior and long-term goals, contributing to beneficial society overall.