Actually the pronunciation and fluency is good, but be careful of the lazy sound
1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
01:02 prefer sending emoji or stuff–> it stop too suddenly. Try to say some experience of you and friend having superficial conversation
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
i like the first standpoint of COVID
01:58: pronunciation–> advice
second standpoint is too short
3.Why do some people feel addicted to social media?
Again, try to dig deeper. You’re always speaking at superficial level
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
Actually the pronunciation and fluency is good, but be careful of the lazy sound
1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
01:02 prefer sending emoji or stuff–> it stop too suddenly. Try to say some experience of you and friend having superficial conversation
2.Do you think social media helps people stay informed?
i like the first standpoint of COVID
01:58: pronunciation–> advice
second standpoint is too short
3.Why do some people feel addicted to social media?
Again, try to dig deeper. You’re always speaking at superficial level
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?