12/10-IELTS Writing Task 2-Kyle

In recent years, peer pressure that exist between classmates, labmates, and colleagues has been noticed on society. Some individuals think that peer pressure bring beneficial results to young generation, while others believe that it causes many negative impacts. From my prospective, I stand with the natural(neutral) side, and the following essay will discuss both viewpoints and illustrate my reasons.

On one hand, peer pressure stimulate young people to cultivate a sense of motivation and competition, which make them processing and find a personal goal. Teenagers usually trigger their movements under competition. For example, college students might find their career directions under peer pressure. When they compete with their classmates, they will realize the field that they have a talent on it. (Personal experience) In addition, high school student likes to participate sport clubs because of the champion, which inspires from competition.

On the other hand, people might be harmed their mental and physical health under peer pressure.(adolescent’s mental and physical health might be damaged under peer pressure) Research indicates that it is easy to cause mental disease, such as depression, when human being surrounds(is surrounded) by huge pressure. For instance, junior engineer always work under the extremely high pressure, because they must compete with other elites and get promotion. Therefore, they need to be more effort to achieve expectations from their managers. Moreover, sleeping issue usually is caused by pressure, and it destroys human’s immunity. They will have a sick more frequently.

In summary, peer pressure is a controversial existence for human, which has many advantages and disadvantages. If young people can find a good method to deal with stress, I believe it would have more positive effects.