11/10-IELTS Writing Task 2-Joy

耗時:35min
Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of technology, it has become the essential part of human’s life. Whereas some individuals think that technology may bring a positive impact, others believe it should be more negative developments. From my perspective, I totally oppose to the statement that may bring more negative consequences.

The main benefit is that technology makes our life(lives) more effective.(technology facilitates our lives) In other words, people can use Artificial Intelligence(AI) tools to manage our daily routine and tasks, which save a great deal of time for some individuals.(Example) In addition, those innovations also be(are) more reliance(reliant) than human, so people nowadays cannot live without them.(Example) For example, many individuals are using AI tools, ChatGPT. to manage their study plan or traveling plan, helping them save about 70% of the total planning time. Since the advanced development of technology, most members of society can focus more on the studying and experience.

Furthermore, as the prevalent of cyber celebrities, influencers can initiate positive activities to promote public awareness. To be more specific, many followers always support their favorite singers or creators, so they must do(would micmic) the things that their favorite one do. For instance, Taiwan had suffered from the severe typhoon last month, which causes severe sediment accumulation at Hualien households; however, there were many internet influencers hold the events that asked every fans to help Hualien residents(holding charity events and asking help from the fans). This events successfully recruited about 45% of Taiwanese to help, speeding up the recovery of the home.  

In conclusion, there is no denying that the evolutions of technology may bring some negative to society, I firmly convinced that it has more positive consequences, which improve the efficiency of human life and promote public awareness.