1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
0:25~0:50: my father is working in China and.. –> background is too long
1:12~1:21: in addition i usually use facetime to tell him my daily life–> redundent and repetitive
1:40~end: short post –> don’t say something you’re not familiar with
5.What do you think social media will look like in the future?
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
excellent first standpoint!
0:49~0:59: we don’t need small conclusion here, it sounds like you want to prolong the time but dont know what to say
1.How has social media changed the way people communicate?
0:25~0:50: my father is working in China and.. –> background is too long
1:12~1:21: in addition i usually use facetime to tell him my daily life–> redundent and repetitive
1:40~end: short post –> don’t say something you’re not familiar with
5.What do you think social media will look like in the future?
4.Do people feel lonelier despite being more connected online?
excellent first standpoint!
0:49~0:59: we don’t need small conclusion here, it sounds like you want to prolong the time but dont know what to say
sound more natural–> 不要試著每個音都發音(連音)
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