1/26-IELTS writing task2-Rebecca

An increasing number of individuals believe that social media influencers have a positive impact in modern society.(,while) Others debate they have a negative effect. In this essay, I totally agree with the (former) statement, and my perspective will be elaborated.

The pivotal reason why content creators can benefit on society is that they are able to promote news by their traffic. Nowadays, everyone is using social media. When different areas are encourter(encounter) difficulties, people can access these news quickly and can gather people to help(news can be spread out in social media rapidly and therefore influencer can gather people to help). For instance, few months ago, Taitung, Taiwan was suffered serious flood, flood with soil even covered the houses, many people were dead or had on houses to live. Nevertheless, individuals from different cities and even foreigners were willing to assist, they prepared the equipment by themselves. If there were not these people, the disaster area could not be recovered so fast. Because of the power of influences, the whole society become better and better.

Another significant factor why influencers have a positive impact is they are able to promote diverse aesthetics(body image). Influencers from different countries may break fixed aesthetic(stereotype), encouraging people to embrace themselves. For example, in some regions, the mainstream beauty are extremely slender body, pale skin and big eyes and so on. Many people in order to pursue or maintain these extreme states, they have to eat less, do plastic surgery, which become a extremely toxic atmosphere. However, via internet, individuals can discover there are various types of look in the world. Consequently, it can make them be more confident and self-loving.

In conclusion, social media influencers play an important role in modern society. They not only assist people access news and information quickly but also deliver positive thoughts and aesthetics that can make the entire society and environment more peaceful and respectful.