The bar chart illustrated the top five countries that exported the amount of coffee, measured in millions of kilograms in 2018 and 2023.
Overall, of the five selected countries, the exportation(export) of the highest million kilogram of coffee was Brazil in both 2018 and 2023. Following that, Vietnam ranked second. Notably, Indonesia exported the least million kilogram of coffee in both year
In detail, Brazil accounted for the most significant, by 2.5 million kilograms in 2018, which was lower by 0.5 million kilogram in 2023. Additionally, the second one was Vietnam , which exported from 1.8 to 2.2 million kilograms. Although the top two countries exported noticeably, Columbia increased stably.
On the other hand, Ethiopia and Indonesia had relatively lowest exports compared to the three highest countries. The former produced 0.8 million kilograms in 2018, which was 0.2 million kilograms higher than the latter. In 2023, Ethiopia exports increased largely by 0.4 million kilograms than five years ago. However, the exportation of coffee was almost unchanged in Indonesia.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of coffee exported by the top five coffee-producing countries—Brazil, Vietnam, Colombia, Ethiopia, and Indonesia—in 2018 and 2023. The figures are measured in millions of kilograms.
Overall, all five countries experienced an increase in coffee exports over the five-year period, with Brazil remaining the largest exporter by a significant margin. In 2018, Brazil exported 2.5 million kilograms of coffee, the highest among all the countries, and this figure rose to 3.0 million kilograms in 2023. Vietnam, the second-largest exporter, also saw a notable increase from 1.8 million kilograms in 2018 to 2.2 million kilograms in 2023.
Colombia and Ethiopia demonstrated more moderate growth. Coffee exports in Colombia increased from 1.2 million kilograms to 1.5 million kilograms, while Ethiopia’s exports rose from 0.8 million kilograms to 1.2 million kilograms during the same period. By contrast, Indonesia had the smallest volume of exports in both years, increasing only slightly from 0.6 million kilograms in 2018 to 0.7 million kilograms in 2023.
In summary, Brazil and Vietnam continued to dominate global coffee exports, while Ethiopia experienced the most significant relative growth among the smaller exporters.