12/27-IELTS Writing Task 2-Kyle

The importance over the saving money for human’s future is a traditional behavior until now. Some people think that saving money for their future is necessary, while others argue that it is more important to spend money for entertainments. From my perspective, I agree that saving money is crucial for everyone, and reasons will be discussed in following essay.

For one thing, saving money for the future can develop self-discipline and improve self-management. It is necessary for people to control their desire in order to minimum(minimize) expenses. For example, the brilliant consumer can divide into needed or desire. In addition, self-management is also the key to save money, because individual needs to manage their expanse well. For instance, wealthy usually has ability to plan their income, accumulating poverty rapidly.

For another thing, saving money for future not only achieve a sense of accomplishment but also foster a sense of responsibility. People might set a mount of money as a goal, which can gain a sense of accomplishment from it. For example, freshmen frequently set one million dollars deposit as a goal. They will effort to achieve it and get a sense of accomplishment. Moreover, humans might realize their responsibility and save money for their future, because they should live independently. For instance, adults have to work and earn money by themself rather than relying their parents.

In summary, saving money for the future is not only cultivate useful skills but also bring mental health. Therefore, it is important for everyone to save money for their future.

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