11/13-IELTS Writing Task 2-Katiya

In contemporary society, it is crucial that everyone must interact with others, while some argue that family provides the roots of socialization, which makes people become overall physical and mental health, I believe that friends are more important since they help people improve and occupy the most part of life.

 

One of the major reasons why friends bring more advanced assistance for people is that they play a crucial role in motivating people. If some stayed with a person who has numerous merits or the same goal as them, there are more opportunities they can imitate each other and push them to succeed. For instance, in academic periods, peers as long-standing character who usually have similar goals or positive attitudes, are more likely to imitate each other’s good habits and improve together. Due to this process of learning and support, students can inspire themselves and achieve more motivation to face the future instead of getting stuck.

 

However, friends not only become a learning module but also provides a long-lasting company. Compared with families, such as parents who just can stay with only about half life of their children, the peers who aged closely are able to accompany each other for a long time. For example, in most situations, children face separation from their parents earlier than peers and peers who offer mental support can be a vital role that prevents those who lost parents immerse themselves into excessive sorrow. Friends, who play the character as mental foundation, always prevent individual from loneliness.

 

 In conclusion, although families shape individual’s basic personality, peers are more important since they not only make people become better one but stay with each other like a spiritual accompany.

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