0903_IELTS Writing Task 2 Money_Lesley

Undoubtedly, with time progressing, saving money is no longer an isolated topic but has become a widely debated issue. Whereas some believe that everyone should save money wisely for their future, others view it as something unnecessary. As for my perspective, I am in favor of the latter, and the reasons will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.

First and foremost, with regard to financial savings(if young adults save money for the future), individuals’ quality of life is more likely to decline. To be more specific, young people, unlike adults, usually have lower salaries and limited savings, which must be allocated to household expenses. As a result, requiring them to save a portion of their income may inevitably reduce their daily standard of living. For instance, when I first entered the workforce, I joined a regular savings plan that required me to pay NT $5,000 every month. With high rental costs in Taipei, this financial burden significantly increased my pressure and limited my ability to enjoy daily life, demonstrating the heavy financial demand for young people. 

Secondly, it is crucial for individuals to invest in themselves in order to acquire valuable skills. Specifically, compared with saving money, it is more crucial for young people to spend their income on developing practical skills, such as learning foreign languages and financial literacy. Take Taiwan as an example.(,) In recent years, many fresh graduates have chosen to take English online courses after work, as they(it) can not only strengthen their basic English ability but also increase their chances of promotion. As a result, young people are more likely to become more competitive in the job market, ultimately securing better employment opportunities and higher income. 

In conclusion, based on the aforementioned, not everyone must save money for their future. For young people in particular, maintaining their quality of life and investing in themselves are more crucial priorities.

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