7/29-IELTS Writing Task 2-Reico

The questions of whether individuals need to save money for their future.This issue has gained attention has long been debated, dividing opinions. In my opinion, I agree that young people should accumulate savings.This essay will discuss my reasons for this stance and provide examples to support my opinion, leading to a reasoned conclusion.

  
Firstly, one of the main reasons why is I believe build up savings can give people a greater sense of security and dealing with accident. For instance, three years ago, a friend of mine had a big operation for her disease and she paid several items, such as treatment fee and drugs. Fortunately, through saved money and insurances, she could afford this high costs. This clearly demonstrates that saved money is a positive habits and helps people manage emergencies effectively.

  
Furthermore, I believe that developing a saving habit is beneficial when I consider some elder people who can opt for their favourite lifestyle after retiring. For example, in west countries, many elder people travel to a lot countries and enjoying various activities through their saved money. Compared to those who did not save enough,  people with sufficient savings have more freedom to choose the lifestyle they enjoy and feel less financial pressure.

 
In conclusion, although some people may believe that saving money is not necessary. I strongly believe that individuals should save for a rainy day. Saving money not only helps people cope with emergencies but also provides them with more freedom to choose the lifestyle they want after retirement.

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