6/16-IELTS Writing Task 2-Elsa

In recent years, with the advancement of technology, there has a growing debate over whether technology has a positive influence on society or it brings more negative results into our daily life. In my opinion, I completely agree that technology contributes more positive sides to our modern life. 

First of all, advanced technology makes our lives more efficient and convenient in several aspects. For instance, the automatic eco mode provided by intelligent air conditioners help reduce energy consumption, lowering the electricity bills and lessening the environmental impact. Throughout(Through) these innovations, it can not only decrease the pollution of carbon emission and protect the environment we live in, but also create a healthier living circumstance for both current and future generations.

Furthermore, technology enables communication faster and without any boundaries.(technology exacerbates communication without any restriction) Social media or chatting apps such as Instagram, WhatsApp and Messenger allow people to connect with friends and family across the globe in real time, regardless of location. These tools maintain the relationship between(among) people and tackle the long distance issues. For example, international students who have to stay abroad and can not interact with their families in person frequently during the study year, these social media apps play an important role in keeping them in touch.

In conclusion, from my perspective, technology has brought more positive points than negative points to society in recent years. It improves the quality of daily lives and constantly increases convenience, and offers more efficient solutions to face today’s challenges.