2. Why not conclude the first part by stating “one positive influence on you”–> By being familiar with this news(Trump elected as the president), I did learn more about United States politics, which I’m interested in, and how to become a charismatic leader
3. “baiting news”
第三題-
1. It’s stream from the projector??
2. the second part only last 13 seconds(35~49) the screen attracts our brain and let our brain work/and some of the people would be addicted–> Here you’re only citing scientific facts, so it doesn’t sound “enough, vivid”
第四題-
1. haa, i like the part, “But it is all fake.. think about..”
2. the second part you mention the cold company from phone can never replace the real one
–> “Give me your personal example, compare it”
第五題-
1. will still growth–> will still “grow”
2. GIVE OUT YOUR STANDPOINTS AT THE VERY BEGINNING, don’t you think your answer here is not structural? You running out of words, and just keep uttering because of the time
第二題-
1. bad opening because of the “fluency”
2. Why not conclude the first part by stating “one positive influence on you”–> By being familiar with this news(Trump elected as the president), I did learn more about United States politics, which I’m interested in, and how to become a charismatic leader
3. “baiting news”
第三題-
1. It’s stream from the projector??
2. the second part only last 13 seconds(35~49) the screen attracts our brain and let our brain work/and some of the people would be addicted–> Here you’re only citing scientific facts, so it doesn’t sound “enough, vivid”
第四題-
1. haa, i like the part, “But it is all fake.. think about..”
2. the second part you mention the cold company from phone can never replace the real one
–> “Give me your personal example, compare it”
第五題-
1. will still growth–> will still “grow”
2. GIVE OUT YOUR STANDPOINTS AT THE VERY BEGINNING, don’t you think your answer here is not structural? You running out of words, and just keep uttering because of the time