第一題-
1. However, the distance did not disconnect us–> “Even though we lived far away”, the distance did not disconnect us
2. I use social media, like Line, Facebook, to keep in touch with them–> I keep in touch with them on social media, like Line Facebook.
3. There should be a nice topic sentence and story following the second part–> my friend didn’t take an important message seriously which kinda resulted in a serious problem..
4. the content of second part is a bit not enough, vivid. –> Try again in class!
第一題-
1. However, the distance did not disconnect us–> “Even though we lived far away”, the distance did not disconnect us
2. I use social media, like Line, Facebook, to keep in touch with them–> I keep in touch with them on social media, like Line Facebook.
3. There should be a nice topic sentence and story following the second part–> my friend didn’t take an important message seriously which kinda resulted in a serious problem..
4. the content of second part is a bit not enough, vivid. –> Try again in class!